An ode to the bard

The sun has set

World engulfed by darkness

A song unsung

A story incomplete

A relationship unnamed

Fodder for destruction.

Darkness

The first ray of sun

A ray of hope

The guide of life

Eclipsed by the darkness

The world moves on.


About Agnivo Niyogi

Typical Aantel, reader, blogger, news addict, opinionated. Digital media enthusiast. Didi fanboi. Joy Bangla!

Posted on August 8, 2010, in poetry. Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. Nice….u are really turning into a poet who conveys so much in very few words🙂

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  2. @sukhi🙂

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  3. Agniiiiii, you should write a bit longer (just a stupid suggestion) coz the flow really picks up well in your work.

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  4. flow picks up okay…but there should be a stop…the reader to be allowed to imagine a little…(stupid or sane?) yeah the world goes on expecting the light again!

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  5. U make me think with ur poems .. nice good going .. are u in Networked Blogs ?? If not , join u might get the audience u deserve to get ..🙂

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  6. nice one man. liked it, though it moves too fast for a person to imagine and figure out

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  7. Really nice lines! The flow is a bit fast but still it is gud.

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  8. Yes…liked the flow…it’s a nicely written piece…🙂

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