The wait seemed eternal

Dead expressions

Teary eyes

A few lost words….

The sound of rain

The smell of the earth

The clouds playing the sky

Beckoning me

Towards a new beginning

The door stands ajar

The sea beyond the threshold

I step into the water

And fly way

Into nothingness

A second door

Open, inviting

I look inside

And find love

And suddenly a storm brews

Lightning strikes the shade

I look around

I am all alone.

The road keeps moving

Ahead is my destiny

For love whispered in my ears

“You find salvation in me.”

About Agnivo Niyogi

Typical Aantel, reader, blogger, news addict, opinionated. Digital media enthusiast. Didi fanboi. Joy Bangla!

Posted on August 12, 2010, in poetry. Bookmark the permalink. 19 Comments.

  1. Your poetry power is gr8 yaar 🙂 well done 😥 plz tweet kr bhai 😦


  2. Very truthful expressions and feelings i can see.. We all have come across this in diff stages of life … Hope 2 see ya soon on twitter 🙂 And keep blogging n reminding 🙂 Tkcr and rock on


  3. I’m stand still, path moves beneath me, oh! U find me,my love, now i’m spreadin like sea.

    I’ll alws feel blessed by nature that me n u have born in a same era n I proudly can say ‘Agnivo, u’r my friend’.


  4. First of all, there are grammatical mistakes. I’ll advise using a word processor with spelling & grammar checking capabilities next time. Apart from that, strictly speaking, I don’t have the required aptitude for criticizing poetries. Are you sure poetry is a more suitable medium than prose to express yourself?


  5. @Nabeel haha! i will join twitter again when i am ready 🙂

    @ashik nothing to say #hugs


  6. @debsuvra i saw the spelling mistakes after posting….as regards poetry vs prose, i will vote for poetry because i feel i can express more using less words.


  7. i really like this… darun hoechhe…. amra dujone mile boi chhapabo… ami “figments of imagination”, tui… “images of life”….


  8. few are the chosen ones who get salvation in love !! great poem 🙂


  9. ahh… bro ur poems r just so awesome !! love the way u write!! trying to follow ur footsteps


  10. This is what i was talking about… making the best of flow. .. keep up. 🙂


  11. nice one brother…reating it fells like its about road of life


  12. Well Seems beneath your skin But I didnt find the context of this introspection.. :O


  13. Beautiful! Last line says it all, a living beings salvation is in Love!


  14. yeah that is the salvation: LOVE


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