Forever yours
A lump in the throat
A tear in the eye
An unspoken word
Bid you good bye.
I look up from the well
Look at you
You held out your hand
I try to reach out
Wall collapses, i die.
I wake up in my sleep,
Feel you by my side,
Your hand holding mine
will never let me die.
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Posted on July 31, 2010, in poetry. Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.
Agnivo Niyogi
Aaganz World 
Nice one! Having something that will keep u tied to earth implies u have living a life worth living.
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this poem reflects a part in all our lives, and each person to read this poem will feel a sense of belonging
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Dil ka rishta dil se hotha,, chaiye kitne bhi doori oh.. hamesha dhadkatha dusre ke liye hai,,,, amazing 🙂
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a crisp belonging message…yes we need a clasping hand.
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sad poem .. agnivo its high time you start writing things which will push you towards +ve energy ! Your recent tweets n blog article is only leading u towards depression .. And you know that’s not good for you .. I will forward u a mail which i got today , maybe it will inspire you or bring a smile and also much needed +ve energy missing in u nowadays !! Keeping smiling 🙂
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Lovely. Honest too. Keep writing. 🙂
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@everyone thanx for sharing your views 🙂
@sid yeah i am trying to get over my depression by indulging in it 🙂
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Too good…too true! 🙂
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“Your hand holding mine
will never let me die.”
that was the hallmark of the poem. Keep it up
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