Love
A little bird chirruped
I thought it was you
The tides in the river roared
I looked at you
Clouds gathered over our heads
A drop fell on my hand
I looked at the sky
Words were flying around us
I could not catch
You stared at me
And i stared back
Silence stepped in
Conveyed the perfect words
And we just smiled!
Together.
Posted on August 5, 2010, in poetry, Uncategorized. Bookmark the permalink. 20 Comments.
‘Love’ is lovely…
Enjoy the bliss & glee.
Wishing you two loads of roses & sunshine in the years to come.
:-}
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thanx so much buddy 🙂
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good one 🙂 you put the words in such a ease
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gud one… wish u both all the very best in ur life
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@nabeel i wish i could put words into action in Real too 😀
@aditya thanx bhai 🙂
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loved the flow in your verses !! perfect 🙂
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thanx a lot 🙂
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life flows flowlessly, watching it from the distence, merging n demerging every emotion, i’m stagnance.
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Oh! Nice.. Short and Sweet! Keep writing! 😉
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Nice poem bhai. Liked ur poetry. Wishing u lots of love in ur life.
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thanx chandan :)))
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Wow! the image and the poem are made for each other. Smiles!
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Loved it.
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This has left me speechless! :):)
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LOvely, Lovey Dovey poem, that pic at bottom is perfect, which one of the 2 is u? 🙂 Keep writing!
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@aditya hahahaha find out yourself which one i am 😀
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you have expressed ur feeling so nicely….hats of to u dear! keep on writing this way.
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